Portrait and Description
by Bilal and Dora
Eagle Eye Picture
recreated by our Walter Hays partners
Eagle Eye has two brown wings, with black in the middle and at the end. He has a big, brown, muscular arm with blue muscles in the middle. He has red hands with sharp claws. Eagle Eye has a yellow thing under his arm, but we don't quite know what it is yet.
He has a snake-like body and tail. This part is simple. Just draw a tail with a skinny streak of orange in the middle. Then make a thick layer of green on each side of the orange. Then, outline the monster with red up to its head. Then at the end of the tail put a red stinger with a black line in the middle. Then outline the monster with a thin line black marker and you are done!
Analysis
by Bilal and Dora
One thing we did wrong was that we forgot to say that our monster was facing sideways. Also, we measured in centimeters instead of millimeters. We didn't tell the color of the lasers. Another thing we forgot to write was that the laser beams were parallel. We didn't say that it only has one arm showing. We forgot to say that there was no body. Our monster is just all a tail, except from the arm up. We forgot to tell them how the stinger was shaped. Also, we forgot to tell the shape of the wings and that they were in back of each other. We forgot to say that the bananas were 3-D.