Dragon Breath

Portrait and Description

by Annie and Dean


Dragon Breath Picture

recreated by our Walter Hays partners


Its head is oval like an egg. The mouth is like a half of a circle, flat on the top. The teeth are sharp. The sides of the mouth have long sharp teeth. The middle of the mouth has short and sharp teeth which are yellow. Also, they are like vampire teeth. Its eyes are red like the sunset and the eyes are slanted. The monster has a white head band. The face is purple. It has white horns. The shape of the horns is like half of a crescent moon. The nose is like a wolf's. The mustaches are black and sticking up.

It is wearing a dress. The dress is the shape of a triangle. The length is about two inches. It is the color of a strawberry.

The arms are green. The arms are as skinny as a toothpick and the length of a toothpick. The legs are purple and three centimeters long. The feet are like a ballerina at a show and they are purple.

Analysis

by Annie and Dean

We think we explained the head well because we said the head is oval like an egg. Another thing that we were good at was saying the middle of the mouth had sharp short teeth.

Our horns were not explained well. The horns are beside the head and they should be more on top. The mouth was also not explained well. All the teeth should be yellow. For the mouth we should have said all the teeth were yellow instead of saying the sharp teeth were yellow. The mustaches were not well explained because they drew them straight.


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