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Monster Portrait by Mitchell and Frank
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Monster Recreation by Erik and Helene
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by Frank and Mitchell Our monster is called Shocking Men. Now we will tell you how to make it. Shocking Men has two heads. One head is a block V and the other head is a circle. The block V head is on the left and the circle head is on the right. Under the two heads is a circle neck. Two yellow lightning bolts are on the two points of the block V's head. You can see two yellow currents with one blue current in the middle of the two yellow currents. The currents are between the two lighting bolts. The block V's eyes are two black lightning bolts. Its mouth is a black oval. The circle head has five yellow lightning bolts for hair. The nose is one yellow lightning bolt and the mouth is a sideways yellow lightning bolt. It has two eyes and they are circles. In the middle of each eye is one lightning bolt. Their body is shaped like a sideways bean. There are three yellow lightning bolts in the body. In the middle of the three lightning bolts there are two yellow currents with two blue currents in the middle of the yellow currents. Inside the body there are 13 yellow lightning bolts. Their arms are up and they are holding one yellow lightning bolt in each hand. There are two yellow lightning bolts in each arm. Its legs are two blue short rectangles. The two feet are lightning bolts. Don't forget to outline the monster in a black pen. Outline the nose, the eyes, the legs, the head, the three lighting bolts in the middle of the body, the body, the mouth, the hands, and each lightning bolt in each hand. That's how you make our monster. |
by Mitchell and Frank Eric and Helene did pretty well on our monster: Shocking Men. They did well on our mouth and eyes by putting them in the right places. Eric and Helene made a good body with the right amount of lightning bolts in its body. Shocking Men's two heads had the right amount of lightning bolts in them, too. If we explained about the faces they might have made them better. The arms were wrong because we forgot to say not to color them. We said it had two lightning bolts in each arm, but they didn't draw it. We think talking a little more about the arms might make more sense to them. If we said draw two circle collars instead of a neck it might be clearer to them. They made its legs too fat, and the feet are wrong way because we never told them the way they were supposed to be. We think they didn't draw currents because they didn't understand how to make any currents. We think they didn't draw them because they didn't understand to make a zigzag line. The way Shocking Men is holding the lightning bolts is wrong because we didn't say which way to draw it. Their Shocking Men drawing was really good, and if we improve on our description it would be even better |
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