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Monster Portrait
by Brian R. and Shruti

Monster

Monster Recreation
by Gillian and David

Monster

Description
by Shruti and Brian R.

This is our monster. We hope you like it and enjoy it. Our monster has five eyes. One of them is in the top of his head and is drawn in pencil. He has no nose, but he breathes from his head. His mouth is always closed. He has a yellow head and red eyes.

He has one green arm and two brown ones. His triangular fingers are purple. His feet are tiny circles.

He has a blue chest and a black one. He has a heart shaped chest and a cone shaped one on the bottom. He has squares in the center of each chest. He has yellow polka-dots on his genie skirt. Hope you enjoy it!

Analysis
by Brian R.

I was surprised when I saw your monster. I like the size you made it. The yellow skin color on the head is good. It was lucky you guessed it was drawn with marker, so the colors were similar.

The new monster looked very different from the original monster. We didn't describe the green mushroom shaped eyeball on the top of the monster's head. When we wrote about the squares in the chest we should have said they were red. The black chest is on the bottom of the blue chest, and is smaller. When we described the skirt we forgot to say the polka dots were small, in pencil, and about 100 of them. We left out the part about the legs. His legs are very skinny, made with black felt tip marker. It was a nice try though!

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