Extraterrestrial Portrait by Merrill and Julien

Extraterrestrial Recreation by Darren and Scot

Description by Julien and Merrill Our extraterrestrial is named Venom. It has two big eyes. On its head there are two big spikes and four small spikes that are orange. Each spike has a black pearl and a V shape that connects the pearls. It has two more electrical connected spikes. It has two eye brows that are almost a V. In between there is a mouth with rotten teeth. The body of our alien has a pulled in cape and a sideways orange diamond with a vertical stretched rubber band in the middle. Inside the rubber band there are ribs that are red with green guts in between them. The rest of the body is black. The slug legs have the shape of a squiggly shaped shoe that is pointed to the right. Inside there are red dots with green around them and the rest of the slug is blue.

Analysis by Julien When Darren and Scott drew our picture they drew some things right. The guts and ribs were right. The orange diamond chest was right. The spikes on his head were accurate. The legs were red and blue and green with dots. There were some things we should have done to describe our picture better. We should have told them that the face was red and that the ribs were in the middle. We should have said that the orange diamond was in the middle of his body. We forgot to say that he had rotten teeth and that the cape was pulled around his body. Our Walter Hay partner did a good drawing of Venom. The best parts were the guts, the ribs, and the head.

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