Flare

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Extraterrestrial Portrait
by Harpinder and Benny

Flare

Extraterrestrial Recreation
by Evelyn and Alexa

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Description
by Benny and Harpinder

Our creature's name is Flare. The tail is as long as its body. The tip comes to a red triangle. The tail curves around his feet. Its four legs are green and come into the body without any trace. It has three claws on each foot and they are white with red spots. Its wings are shaggy and yellow. It has two and they come out right behind the head.

Its two heads come into the body without any trace. They have blue hair on the top of their head and neck. The hair sticks up. Flare has one red eye on each head. The eyes are on the side that is facing you. It is facing left. Flare has red teeth and a red forked tongue. It is breathing fire.

Analysis
by Harpinder and Benny

We will tell you the things the Walter Hays students did to make their drawing the same as ours. They colored every thing correctly, but they used pink instead of red. They got the two heads and the wings. They put a red triangle at the end of his tail. They made him breathing fire, and they gave him claws with spots on them.

If we could change our description, we would tell the size and tell them to use red on splotches on his toes. We would tell them to put the wings together. Also we would say to make the bottom head larger than the top head and to keep the mouth open. The eyes should be pure red (no white at all) and smaller. We would change the hair description to something more like a rooster's crown. The fire should be more square. Finally, we should have said the tail should be twice as long as the body and be between his legs. We think the students at Walter Hays did a great job drawing our ET.

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