Portrait and Description
by Caitlin and Alek
Alien Picture
recreated by our Walter Hays partners
His white donut-shaped body is sprinkled with rainbow polka dots. He has six hands that stick out from his body on wrists, but no arms. The upper hand closest to the left side of the paper is purple. The middle one is orange and the bottom one is blue. On the right side of the paper, the upper hand is red, the middle hand is yellow, and the bottom hand is green. In his green hand, he is holding a dark blue closed umbrella. In his blue hand he is holding a yellow cage with a tiny replica of himself. Instead of feet he has a red spring that lets him bounce up and down. Zwort is a very amazing creature.
Analysis
by Caitlin and Alek
Our partners did a really good job on almost everything. There were only two things that we could have described better: the antennae were straight instead of curved, and the whole body is outlined in black.
The doughnut-shaped body is good, but we didn't tell them that the dots were large and didn't completely cover the doughnut. The neck should be wiggly, but in our partners' drawing, it is straight. There are two springs instead of one and the cage is completely yellow instead of showing the tiny replica. The springs were well-drawn and so was the head. The umbrella was good, too. Our partners' drawing was very close to ours.
