Talon

Portrait and Description

by Roscoe and William

Alien Picture

recreated by our Walter Hays partners

The body is basically just thin and brown. The whole body is brown.

It has two tentacle-like arms with a curved blue blade at the end of each arm. There is another blue blade one fourth of the way up from the end of each arm, curving inward. Small arm blades cover both arms.

It has one bent knee and two toes with a terrible claw on each foot.

Its tail is curved up and has a red scorpion stinger at the tip.

There are a fair number of things our partners did well. They got the right number of eyes, for example. They got the snake-like neck and most of the tail right, too. About 2/4 of the shapes were right. About 1/4 of the size was right.

We could have described the size and direction of the alien by saying the alien was facing to the left and saying that it was the side view of the alien. We could have also described the head better by saying the head is not very big, but just smaller than the right size for the body.

In general, we thought our partners did a pretty good job.