Portrait and Description
by Alexandria and Ben
Alien Picture
recreated by our Walter Hays partners
He has muscular arms and he has a toaster burn on his left arm. Our alien's right arm has a yellow tattoo that looks like an armband made up of small squiggly lines with dots in them. He has stitches on his chest which look like a tilted rectangle with lines coming out. The arms are shaped like human arms. On his right arm he has a half red oval wrist and five black fingers. The other side of the wrist is off the page. He has red spikes facing inwards on his chest and legs. Part of his feet are orange barrels with fire coming out where the feet should be. The colors are half red and half yellow.
Analysis
by Alexandria and Ben
We think that almost everything our partners did was great. On the head where the spikes should be was wonderful. The colors of the face and feet were great. The scars on the face were nice. The yellow tattoo was okay, and the black hands were good. The mouth and teeth were okay.
We could have made our description clearer by telling our partners the size of the alien. We also should have told them what color the burn was, and what color the body was.
