Berserker

Portrait and Description

by Paul and Daniel

Alien Picture

recreated by our Walter Hays partners

The head is green. It is a smooth upside down triangle head. It has two oval yellow eyes. The pupils are slits. There are two clippers on the bottom of its mouth.

It has a green oval body. Two little blue clipper arms are in the middle of its body. The aliens other mouth is silver with white teeth and is in between the blue arms. There are curved arms with metal talons that electrocute things at the ends of the arms. There is one M-16 machine gun on each side of the body around the waist area.

It has upside-down V feet with a chain of bullets on its right leg and a U.S. army kit on the left leg. The legs are green. The tail is a large red scorpion tail. On it is a missile rack. The missiles are gray with red fins.

Analysis

These are some things that our partners did well: They colored the alien the right color. They made the alien's eyes oval, and the pupils are slits. The tail is the right color. But the eyes are the wrong color.

These are things we could have made clearer: We should have said, "There is one missile firing. The machine guns are firing." We should have said, "The alien is skinny and you should outline the alien." We should have told them where to put the arms.

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This page maintained by Lucinda Surber. Last updated 12/16/97.