This is Scarface from the planet Hothead. He has a green head. The head is a triangle with one point facing down. The point facing down and the other two points are rounded. The head is about the size of a thumb. In the rounded corners there are compound eyes. In between the eyes there is a red scar that is diagonal, but close to vertical. The top of the scar is facing right. On top of the head there is fire. The fire is a lot like a long crown leaning right. The fire has a contrast of red, orange, and yellow. The neck is short and thin and is a light sea-green color. At the top of the neck there are two small points. The neck is on the top center of the body.

The body is a long, vertical rectangle with a semi-circle at the top. The semi-circle and the rectangle are each about as wide as the length of a top part of a pinkie finger. The body is yellow with four red scars. The arms are a third of the way down from the top of the body. The arms are purple, going straight out until the elbow. After the elbow, the arms go straight down. The left arm has a vertical red scar right above the hand. The right arm has a diagonal red scar next to the body. The scar’s bottom is facing right. The first scar on the body is on the arm line. It is the opposite direction as the one we just described. The second scar is about a pencil-point from the top scar and is facing the opposite direction. The third scar is a pinkie finger’s width down from the second one. It is the same direction as the top one. The last scar is a pencil-point’s length from the third scar. As the pattern goes, it is the opposite direction as the third scar. All of the scars on the body are zig-zaggy. The scars on the arms are not zig-zaggy. The arms are like normal arms except they’re purple and have scars. The hands are like normal hands except they’re purple. The fingers get longer as they go towards the body.

The legs start thin and get wider lower they get. When they start they are half as wide as the body, but when they end, they are a bit wider than the body. The legs are green with orange ends and red scars. The legs just end flat, with no feet. The orange parts are flat on the bottom and zig-zaggy at the top. The red scars are just long red gashes from the top to the bottom of the legs. When we say right we mean the right side of the paper. And that is all we are telling you about Scarface, from the planet Hothead.

This what we think you did well on. We think you did well on putting the right number of scars on the body and coloring it correctly. We also think that you colored and put the scars on the arms correctly. You also did well on the green legs and orange feet. You did well on coloring the fire on the head. You did great on the shape of the head. You had right proportioning.

These are some things we should have made clearer. We should have been clearer about the whole alien’s size. We also should’ve told you more about the fire on the head. We also should have been clearer about the scars on the head and legs. Also we should have defined compound eyes. Lastly we should have said large thumb size and that it was outlined in black.

We had a really hard description and you did a great job!